two more pages of Gene Fitness's comic

I still don't know about how I could incorporate text, or what kind of text would even work, but it seems like it might be necessary to clarify the story. I'm getting a little better at getting a range of values, I like the noirish look, but I have been wrestling with getting straight lines to contrast with the painted lines. I ordered a device that is supposed to make them, so we'll see in about a week...

Vlad's drawings

Here are some beautiful drawings by Vlad. How they will be arranged still needs to be worked out, but that will be developed in tandem with the imagery. 

Gene Fitness's new panels

Still working out how the markmaking is going to work, but getting closer. Really haven't had much time to work on these. Next month I plan to work some serious hours on them. I do find that putting in a little at a time though still allows for some nice progression.